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Third Rough Edit Bellum Omnium In Omnes

Second Rough Edit of Bellum Omnium In Omnes

First Rough Edit of Bellum Omnium In Omnes

Targets From Jake

1. Make the images look older, posterize?
2. Make the narration slower, Zac talks too fast
3. Give more images to the dialogue
Overall your thing is really good but it just needs improving with these few targets.
You need to show understanding of single camera techniques with your own footage and shots, maybe also slow down the narrative on the dialouge as it is too hard to keep up with.

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